Sequence Revisions
I took the more intestinal approach that we had talked about last time, and I used high intensity and low intensity areas in three different sequences in order to create a hierarchy and rhythm. I also alternated between using completely closed spaces and open spaces in order to make a more interesting composition.
The shots are the individual structures, the montages are where these spaces collide, and the rhythm is as I discussed before. All of this combined in three separate sequences comes together in for one sequence.
Axon View 
Three sequences separated. 
More understandable view.
